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What blows in the wind... by ~archmagesynok:iconarchmagesynok:



I throw my soul into the wind
and watch it swirl around
with more life than I could have given it,
As I watch
it rolls and twists in the air,
wraps around a pole,
for a brief moment
then continues down the street;
full of life
full of purpose,
I let it go free
and free myself,
Goodbye little soul.
©2009-2010 ~archmagesynok
:iconarchmagesynok:

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twas a windy day last month

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:iconsaffyre-onyx:
It's a very nice image, but soulless Shawn is like Shawnzombie, only less decomposed. Shawnzombie is creepy.
:iconarchmagesynok:
well if it makes you feel any better that last few lines I cut out of the poem were about picking up some mud and starting to form a new soul. But I liked it better without those lines.

shawnzombie only wants a hug...and a little nibble.

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The voice that pierces deep into my chest is like a never-ending cheer.
:iconsaffyre-onyx:
:hug:
I don't think there's a "here, have a little nibble" emote, but there is a really cute zombie glomp emote deviation.

It's a very lovely poem. It just made me a little sad.
:iconarchmagesynok:
well no being sad :glomp:

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The voice that pierces deep into my chest is like a never-ending cheer.
:iconhell-on-a-stick:
come back!

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Behold! I am that which must always overcome itself. - Friedrich Nietzche
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